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heart's love doors |
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Gentle Soul Member
since 1999-07-12
Posts 273Vinton,Ohio USA |
With my hearts love doors open wide, Giving all with nothing to hide. I lay my love to those who "need", But just to make, my love doors bleed. I care for all, who for me? are you out there? Can you see? I am a girl, not a machine, Just a big heart, just pure and clean. many times I've been knocked down My heart jabbed again I frown… Never have I just turned my care off, thinking Id find, my “friend” too soft Im a hurt girl, deep within tears streamin fast down my chin many times my heart has been stabbed now the hurts are carefully tabbed Slowly my hearts love doors close None in it, so none to doze I know I will be set for pain Plenty to lose.. but none to gain ------------------ Gënt£ë¤§°û£ |
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Lost Dreamer Member Elite
since 1999-06-20
Posts 2464Somewhere near the Rainbow |
This is sad, it sounds like you have a kind and sweet heart. Don't close it up, and shut it off, what you have to offer will be rewarded in time. |
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DreamEvil Member Elite
since 1999-06-22
Posts 2396 |
I knew you had the courage to write this, Little Sister. You've done very well indeed.  ------------------ Shall I indulge in flights of fancy hampered by clipped wings? DreamEvil© |
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WhtDove Member Rara Avis
since 1999-07-22
Posts 9245Illinois |
I agree, you have done a wonderful job! Don't keep count, and don't close off your heart. There are those that will love you for who you are. Life just comes with pain sometimes. Chin up stand tall, You're a beautiful person with a beautiful heart. Keep writing...  |
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Gentle Soul Member
since 1999-07-12
Posts 273Vinton,Ohio USA |
Thank you Guys, DE... I give you credit for helping me with the choppiness, I know it may not be perfect.. but Im learning eh? and also big brother, you are so special in my heart.. and I thank you for always listening to me when I need a shoulder to lean and cry on.. *hugs* WhtDove, thank you for replying, I wasnt always so sad and depressing honest I wasnt.. and I have mostly happy moments.. but then there is still hurt, but I am fine nevertheless.. With God on my right, and my DarkAngel on the left, and all my other friends behind, the only way I can go is forward.. and I am heading there fast I honestly believe.. ------------------ Gënt£ë¤§°û£ |
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leelew Member
since 1999-07-10
Posts 89highmount,ny,usa |
Angel....you'll never be able to close those doors.There's to much love held within.....well done! |
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Gentle Soul Member
since 1999-07-12
Posts 273Vinton,Ohio USA |
yes but sometimes I feel I would be better off to just close it, and never let anyone out thats in.. and no one new enter.. hehe |
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WhtDove Member Rara Avis
since 1999-07-22
Posts 9245Illinois |
Once again to the top you go, so through others your poetry may flow! |
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