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Cobra Member
since 1999-07-27
Posts 58 |
Like a dove lost in the fog, I couldn't see a thing. But knowing that he's waiting there, makes my lonely heart sing. Cold winds can blow all that they can, but it won't hold me back. Knowing that his heart is mine, will throw me back on track. Mountains high and oceans deep, dusty ground and snow from above. All these fears I'll have to face, to get back to my love. Troubles, worries, and pains in my heart, they'll put my spirit to the test. But his prayers will keep me alive, and I will do my best. I'll struggle with my problems, even hold the hand of death. All of this, for my love, for he takes away my breath. ------------------ Cammie |
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Magic Bunny Junior Member
since 1999-07-26
Posts 18 |
Wow, what a gal! She must really love this guy if she'd risk it through all that. I don't think I'm that in love...  Just kidding sweetie! ------------------ The Magical Rainbow Bunny |
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WhtDove Member Rara Avis
since 1999-07-22
Posts 9245Illinois |
No doubt, that kind of love is rare nowadays! Great poem. Keep writing. |
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Princess Lily Member
since 1999-07-13
Posts 149USA |
I ABSOLUTELY LOVED IT.VERY RARE LOVE YET POSITIVELY THE MOST WONDERFUL KIND OF LOVE EVER.  ------------------ We see only what we want to see~unless perhaps~we believe |
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