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Love Affair |
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blueloon Member
since 1999-07-07
Posts 161NY |
Tonight we will meet, But please be discreet! Make sure no one is following you down this very street. I can see your lights. My heart races with delight! I look around no one is in sight. "I'm sorry I have to lie." As I wave to the window good-bye. My heart has now begun to cry. "Stop! I can not commit this crime." I'm beginning to feel like slime. I am no longer on cloud nine! Up the fire escape to the top! Through the window I drop. And quietly into bed I flop. ------------------ To give yourself keeps yourself still, And you must live, drawn by your own sweet skill. -shakespeare |
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poetFemmeFatale Member Elite
since 1999-07-25
Posts 2646Arkansas |
Wowee...you made me feel like I needed to take a shower after reading this one! You are good at making the reader feel a part of the story!  ------------------ - poet FemmeFatale "The strongest man in the world is he who stands most alone..." Henrik Ibsen (1826-1906) Norwegian dramatist lyric poet |
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blueloon Member
since 1999-07-07
Posts 161NY |
Thank you PoetFemmeFatale, for such kind words...no need to take a shower though! blueloon |
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mom New Member
since 1999-07-27
Posts 3Alta Loma,Ca. U.S |
I love it!!...well said! |
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Cinderella Member
since 1999-06-23
Posts 152Arizona |
No guilt should you feel when having a wondrous love affair, This may be a beautiful once in a lifetime chance that is so rare! |
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CSwtThng Member
since 1999-07-28
Posts 124 |
This one made me sweat. Great job. |
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