»
Archives
»
Open Poetry #1
»
To a man in Switzerland...
| Open Poetry #1 |
|
To a man in Switzerland... |
|
|
poetFemmeFatale Member Elite
since 1999-07-25
Posts 2646Arkansas 
|
Usually I've dreamt of a land far away - Where a man would win my love, and steal my heart away. This stranger then, would take my hand, and lead me to the shore - That washes lonely tears away And opens Heaven's door... His voice is strong like thunder, yet gentle as a breeze - And with his eyes so dark & deep, my every need he sees. His smile is enough to chase - all my blues away... His touch is one of warm caress - it carries me away. To lose his love would be just like - A nightmare with no end, My tears would form a sea of grief - no comfort could you send. To live without him would be like - a ship without a shore, The winds would blow me endlessly... I'd have nothing to live for....... ------------------ - poet FemmeFatale "The strongest man in the world is he who stands most alone..." Henrik Ibsen (1826-1906) Norwegian dramatist lyric poet |
||
| © Copyright 1999 Gennifer David - All Rights Reserved | |||
|
poetFemmeFatale Member Elite
since 1999-07-25
Posts 2646Arkansas |
Yeah, here I am again pining for some "mysterious man" from somewhere FAR away.....seems I've spent a good deal of my life doing such silly things! Now my interests have changed, and I've taken up whips & chains, and naughty things - I have to BEAT a man to keep him around !! LOL He's too SCARED to leave ! ROFLOL ..........he he ha ha ya ha ha I kill myself !! ------------------ I beckon you to come...I lure you with my tongue... - poet FemmeFatale |
||
|
poetFemmeFatale Member Elite
since 1999-07-25
Posts 2646Arkansas |
Ya da da Ya da da - I love hearing myself talk....  ------------------ I beckon you to come...I lure you with my tongue... - poet FemmeFatale |
||
|
Severn Member Rara Avis
since 1999-07-17
Posts 7704 |
You shocker! You just don't do us feminists any justice! (jk). I love your whimsical poems - try doing an S&M one!!! |
||
|
Poet deVine
Administrator
Member Seraphic
since 1999-05-26
Posts 22612Hurricane Alley |
Glad you brought this to the top. Sometimes, as you know, when the forums are hopping, gems get pushed to the bottom unread. The title intrigued me! The poem is good, though no man is worth this - well, maybe one but he's spoken for!  |
||
|
RainbowGirl Member Elite
since 1999-07-31
Posts 3023United Kingdom |
Let's hope one day he materialises and the dream lives on in reality..:-)) HUGS ------------------ You give but little when you give of your possessions. It is when you give of yourself that you truly give. |
||
|
caroline Senior Member
since 1999-08-16
Posts 1218http://members.xoom.com/belladona123/index.htm |
If he DOES show up...ask if he has a brother! *LOL*!!!! Loved it PFF! ------------------ The only man worth your tears will never make you cry... |
||
|
Skyfyre Senior Member
since 1999-08-15
Posts 1906Sitting in Michael's Lap |
OK, I am hereby permanently labeling myself as a nut with weird interests, but when I read your description of this dream man for some reason Frey, the Nordic god, sprang to mind... Neat stuff ... as always. Nocht ------------------ "Nunc lento sonitu dicunt, morierus" (Now as I hear this bell tolling softly for another, it says to me, "Thou must die.") |
||
|
Seymour Tabin Member Empyrean
since 1999-07-07
Posts 31720Tamarac Fla |
pFF, All I can say is Some day he'll come along the man I love And he'll be big and strong lalalala. Good job I enjoyed the read. |
||
|
|
⇧ top of page ⇧ |
|
| All times are ET (US). All dates are in Year-Month-Day format. | ||