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Crystal
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since 1999-07-24
Posts 62
Hazel Park Mi U.S.A.

0 posted 1999-07-25 12:32 PM


My beautiful baby laying there so sweet,
'wondering when you'll wake up to eat.

I'm looking at your eyes, ears, and nose,
I'm counting all ten of your fingers,
and all ten of your toes.

I'm wondering how I became so blessed,
All I can say "It's fate I guess."

With every cry, and every sigh,
I pray to god I will never say goodbye.

My beautiful boy I do have to say,
I love you more each and every day.

Soon you will grow and play with your toys,
You'll play with your friends and make lot's
of noise.

Then you'll get older and want girls and cars,
And when your twenty-one you might go to bars.

No matter what happens I'll love you the same,
Wheather you choose McDonald's, a sport, or fame.

But for now it sure is a joy,
to have such a beautiful baby boy!


[This message has been edited by Crystal (edited 07-25-99).]

[This message has been edited by Crystal (edited 10-21-1999).]

© Copyright 1999 Crystal - All Rights Reserved
elvira
Senior Member
since 1999-07-06
Posts 936
California
1 posted 1999-07-25 12:41 PM


what a sweet poem, be sure to save if for him...don't spoil him now *giggles* ...on a sadder note: my mother has already lost two of her sons (one was 21 the other 44)...having no kids of my own (by choice), i can't imagine the joys and/or pains of motherhood...check out my "eight short weeks" if you like

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one night at the airport...Childhood Memories...eight short weeks...your countenance...just watching tv...hoarse whispers...My One and Only...Tribute to M.J....Feel the need?...serving wench...the mistress...stolen hours...Perfection...devotion...Master...apart...plain...chat?

Crystal
Member
since 1999-07-24
Posts 62
Hazel Park Mi U.S.A.
2 posted 1999-07-25 01:31 AM


I'm glad you liked my poem. Thank-you. I am going to find eight short weeks right now. Sorry about yours and your mother's loss. I can't even imagine what it would be like to lose my baby. Even when he gets older.
elvira
Senior Member
since 1999-07-06
Posts 936
California
3 posted 1999-07-25 02:35 AM


thanks for the lift of "eight short weeks" Crystal
Delores Hall
Member
since 1999-07-16
Posts 342
USA
4 posted 1999-07-25 10:27 AM


Crystal,This is beautiful.The crem da la crem.Happy writing.
Delores Hall
Member
since 1999-07-16
Posts 342
USA
5 posted 1999-07-25 01:04 PM


Thank-you Delores. I'm glad you liked it.
Colin
Senior Member
since 1999-06-05
Posts 596
Callington, Cornwall, England
6 posted 1999-07-26 02:38 AM


I want one! *8)
Crystal
Member
since 1999-07-24
Posts 62
Hazel Park Mi U.S.A.
7 posted 1999-07-26 11:59 AM


Well Eric.... Go find a girlfriend and the rest is up to you... :O) ...lol

[This message has been edited by Crystal (edited 10-21-1999).]

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