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Chris h 007
New Member

since 1999-07-24

Posts 6
Australia

0 posted 1999-07-24 07:37 PM

She walks the street`s in need to eat.
In need to feed her son who is only one. They call her a whore, others adore.
For her mother did this when she was four.

This is the life it is a great fright.
To be walking late at night.
She gets beat, she lies, and she cheats.
They call her a whore, others adore.
For her mother started when she was four.

Pimps smack her around and call her a bitch, for now you see she has an itch .
A itch to leave this life another night.
Before another great fright.
She walks the streets in need to eat.
In need to feed her son who is only one.

She dont know what to do for now her son is two. She now has AIDS she is going to die today.She lays in the bed fully dead.
They call her a whore others adore.
For her mother started when she was four.

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Chris h 007
New Member

since 1999-07-24

Posts 6
Australia

1 posted 1999-07-24 07:40 PM

Really great poem hunny! I would like to see more. Keep them coming.

Luv,
Crystal

elvira
Senior Member

since 1999-07-06

Posts 936
California

2 posted 1999-07-24 07:42 PM

*sigh*...thanks for the goosebumps, and... Welcome to the forum Chris

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Poet deVine

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Member Seraphic

since 1999-05-26

Posts 22612
Hurricane Alley

3 posted 1999-07-24 08:37 PM

Welcome to the family!

Delores Hall
Member

since 1999-07-16

Posts 342
USA

4 posted 1999-07-24 09:55 PM

Chris this is very good. I always thought you
could write if you applied yourself to it.You
do need to put your words in the right lines.
But for your first time this is good.I hope that you will write more.Happy writing.

Crystal
Member

since 1999-07-24

Posts 62
Hazel Park Mi U.S.A.

5 posted 1999-07-25 02:00 AM

I think this is a good poem. Beginner or not. I am replying to bring this to the top. I think that more people should read this. Keep up the good work hunny i would love to see more!

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Chris h 007
New Member

since 1999-07-24

Posts 6
Australia

6 posted 1999-07-28 10:17 PM

thank you

Crystal
Member

since 1999-07-24

Posts 62
Hazel Park Mi U.S.A.

7 posted 1999-07-31 08:02 PM

Back to the top!

Sally S.
Senior Member

since 1999-06-07

Posts 847
Ohio

8 posted 1999-07-31 08:19 PM

pretty powerful subject..to be sure. Welcome to the family.

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