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Delores Hall
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since 1999-07-16

Posts 342
USA

0 posted 1999-07-24 05:40 PM

The mammoth doors are huge.
The man is not sure what to do.
Should he open the door and peek inside?
Or should he run and hide?

It all seems like this is an evil dream.
Because behind those doors is evil things.

He always lived his life in a rush.
Never concerned with other people that much.
And he had done some terrible things.
That only God in his life could have changed.

But it's a little to late for that now.
Because you see he died today.
If only he had changed his evil ways.

The voice is tempting him."Open it up."
"Please he says I'm not that well."
"Well well you do tell."
"There is no other way out."
"And that's thru this door.

"Please he say's I can't take this no more."
He touches the handle and opens the door.
The voice beckons him to look.

"Because all your life you only took."
"So look at it my friend,look at it well."
"Because you are looking into the,
Pits Of Hell!

Lost Dreamer
Member Elite

since 1999-06-20

Posts 2464
Somewhere near the Rainbow

1 posted 1999-07-24 05:48 PM

Wow, This is a poem with a lot of insight. Great job. I really like it.

elvira
Senior Member

since 1999-07-06

Posts 936
California

2 posted 1999-07-24 06:55 PM

thanks for the shivers...just hoping i'll never have to open that door

Crystal
Member

since 1999-07-24

Posts 62
Hazel Park Mi U.S.A.

3 posted 1999-07-24 08:26 PM

This really makes me think about what is going to happen after we are gone. I hope I have lived my life right. Another great poem!

Delores Hall
Member

since 1999-07-16

Posts 342
USA

4 posted 1999-07-24 11:47 PM

What if there was no hell?And only a heaven?
That is what I would like think.But we are told otherwise.Thank you for the replies.

Balladeer

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Member Empyrean

since 1999-06-05

Posts 25505
Ft. Lauderdale, Fl USA

5 posted 1999-07-25 01:07 AM

If there were heaven and no hell,
I wouldn't like that very well.
I want a place with devilish frights
For those who ran those yellow lights!

Delores Hall
Member

since 1999-07-16

Posts 342
USA

6 posted 1999-07-25 10:22 AM

Ballader you crack me up.What a sense of humor.

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