Open Poetry #1 |
How thine eyes art to me |
Sundance Member
since 1999-07-11
Posts 123 |
(thanks to Artur, your suggestions r always welcome! ) Thou look at me from different eyes, than when I saw thee last. Because when last I saw thee, We had a blast! Your eyes have changed fron gaiety, many other things different, They are cloudy and changed, although they are still reverent. Where did those happy eyes go? They were a sight to see, Parties were attended, Why did thee do that to me? Although those eyes are now gone, I still love thee, for as thou art, you mean the world to me. |
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Alwye
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since 1999-06-16
Posts 3850In the space between moments |
Great, I like it! ------------------ *Krista Knutson* "It's a crazy thing, fate has perfect wings..."-Deanna Carter |
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