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Open Poetry #1

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Saxoness

Senior Member

since 1999-07-18

Posts 1102
Texas

0 posted 1999-07-22 10:30 PM

Tanka

A tall shivering tree
Wraps its bare branches
Around it's hunched trunk
Looking up through the blustering sky
And silently waiting for spring

~ Angela Erin Burke ~

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"Glory remains unaware of my neglected dwelling where alone
I sing my tearful song which has charms only for me."

-Charles Brugnot

DreamEvil
Member Elite

since 1999-06-22

Posts 2396

1 posted 1999-07-22 11:17 PM

Eloquent.

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Shall I indulge in flights of fancy hampered by clipped wings?
DreamEvil©

Saxoness

Senior Member

since 1999-07-18

Posts 1102
Texas

2 posted 1999-07-23 09:26 AM

thanks

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"Glory remains unaware of my neglected dwelling where alone
I sing my tearful song which has charms only for me."

-Charles Brugnot

doreen peri
Member Elite

since 1999-05-25

Posts 3812
Virginia

3 posted 1999-07-23 12:33 PM

Lovely stanza. I don't get the title, but loved the verse. Good work.

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