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r. baker33 Member
since 1999-07-03
Posts 55glen easton wv |
I try so hard that it hurts. I never seem to get anywhere,and then I stop, and wonder why?all the tears I cry, and still nowhere. each day running into the next. I feel like I am running lifes race to nowhere. is there really a reason,or is it just truth or dare? there is a heavy dark feeling in my soul, a void nothing to fill the hole. still no answers why? things that people take for granted everyday to me are small treasures. keep them near,and dear because someday they will be gone,and so will I. In the after the the next generation will be here asking the same questions,and giving the same thoughts. all with the same conclusion. In every human soul there is only but one certainty. that is eternity! that is the only true meaning of the word forever. |
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poetFemmeFatale Member Elite
since 1999-07-25
Posts 2646Arkansas |
Isn't it strange how all of us are so different, yet at some time or another, in our lives, we all feel the pain you described here? My mind has hurt like this before so many times! I feel your desperation.... ------------------ - poet FemmeFatale "The strongest man in the world is he who stands most alone..." Henrik Ibsen (1826-1906) Norwegian dramatist lyric poet |
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r. baker33 Member
since 1999-07-03
Posts 55glen easton wv |
to the top. |
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WhtDove Member Rara Avis
since 1999-07-22
Posts 9245Illinois |
Nice job, we all need to appreciate the small things in life. Left a note for ya in the poem you just commented on! God be with you. |
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poetFemmeFatale Member Elite
since 1999-07-25
Posts 2646Arkansas |
Gawd Richard, I'm so sorry I screwed your name up - how embarressing ! You'll have to understand how giddy I was when I was typing that -- I've just posted my first in the "naughty" forum and it's been a hit with the guys ! LOL I do know who you are - please forgive me...  ------------------ - poet FemmeFatale "The strongest man in the world is he who stands most alone..." Henrik Ibsen (1826-1906) Norwegian dramatist lyric poet |
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