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Princess Lily Member
since 1999-07-13
Posts 149USA |
for advice-here i should not come but help me please-for i need some so in a poem this will be put please reply i need your input i'm scared of life night and day of what will go and what will stay dearly i do love my friends and family the question is-do they love me? the one true love that i have found has took my heart and thrown it down to be crushed a thousand times every day i wonder why he loves my friend she loves his i love him so tell me-what gives? he likes me but says it would be unfair-see? if he went with me when he loves she i agree but must admit that i know where it went the bottom of the bottomless pit see-i think my heart hit i cry wonder why yet still i wake up every day hoping that day is the day he will give up on her and love me so 'til then i will pray and i'll love him dear 'til the day he whispers in my ear "i love you" ~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~ help-please?? ------------------ We see only what we want to see~unless perhaps~we believe [This message has been edited by Princess Lily (edited 07-22-99).] |
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thursdayschild Member
since 1999-07-01
Posts 169Houston, Tx. |
Oh, dear girl, you are worth more than this, his arrogance, cheating, non-intelligence... Pick-up your heart, and go on from here, another awaits who shall hold you dear. Keep the hope alive! |
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Princess Lily Member
since 1999-07-13
Posts 149USA |
Thank you for replying.Ireally need all the advice I can get.I love him. ------------------ We see only what we want to see~unless perhaps~we believe |
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blueloon Member
since 1999-07-07
Posts 161NY |
I must agree with Thursdaychild, you deserve more than his guile. blueloon |
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Princess Lily Member
since 1999-07-13
Posts 149USA |
Thanks blueloon.I really love him, but I know that i have to let go.I'm still glad we're friends. ------------------ We see only what we want to see~unless perhaps~we believe |
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Sunshine
Administrator
Member Empyrean
since 1999-06-25
Posts 63354Listening to every heart |
Drop drop drop him. Yesterday. As you know from this site, there are far better ones out there. ------------------ Sunshine Words will always express our feelings true. ~~~ KRJ Look, then, into thine heart, and write ~~~ Henry Wadsworth Longfellow |
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Balladeer
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Member Empyrean
since 1999-06-05
Posts 25505Ft. Lauderdale, Fl USA |
You say your heart fell in a pit? Throw him down there next to it!! |
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Princess Lily Member
since 1999-07-13
Posts 149USA |
Balladeer, you seem to be a very intelligent person and I very much appreciate the reply.I will throw him down there, but I leave him with this note.You fell into a pit...in which there is no escape...but, my dear, as for my heart...has left through a secret passage...only the ones who love and lose...find this hidden doorway..as for you...you pretend to love then leave...darling..there is no way out... ------------------ We see only what we want to see~unless perhaps~we believe |
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Princess Lily Member
since 1999-07-13
Posts 149USA |
Sunshine-thank you for the reply.I now realize that it is better to have loved and lost than to never have loved at all.I will always love him of course because love has no limitations, but as dear Balladeer said he should be in that pit.I believe he is truly sorry for hurt me, but in the pit he will go because now from him my heart has a wound that cannot be repaired with him on my mind-again thank you! ------------------ We see only what we want to see~unless perhaps~we believe [This message has been edited by Princess Lily (edited 07-22-99).] |
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Alwye
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Member Elite
since 1999-06-16
Posts 3850In the space between moments |
Sometimes its hard to let them go, my friend. Excellent poem, they help with the pain. I hope to hear from you soon, Meli!!  ------------------ *Krista Knutson* "Your kiss upon my face feels like a brush with grace, baby thats all it takes to take me higher..." SHeDaisy |
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Princess Lily Member
since 1999-07-13
Posts 149USA |
Thank you my sweet friend.It is hard to let go, but I will Yours always~Meli------------------ We see only what we want to see~unless perhaps~we believe *A rose is a rose it withers and dies...so long as you keep it the memories survive* [This message has been edited by Princess Lily (edited 08-09-99).] |
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