Open Poetry #1 |
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Retreat |
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Devilish33 New Member
since 1999-07-21
Posts 3Louisville, Ky......USA |
They take and take, till it's all gone, Another realationship that was all wrong. Someday it'll be my turn,, to take and take, then I'll cause the first burn. But everytime you lose a part, something so precious as your heart. To be able to give back, would be so kind. A Love that one day I will find. To mine a love so pure, so kind, to have faith that's not all blind. To find a love , so great and so sweet, Only then will I have my own retreat. Kim C. |
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Delores Hall Member
since 1999-07-16
Posts 342USA |
Wonderful piece. Good writing. |
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Yoman3759 New Member
since 1999-07-22
Posts 1Louisville,KY,USA |
I think it's a brilliant poem, so full of a kind of "normalcy" that lets you feel that these feelings are like my own...Good work Devilish... ------------------ Tony |
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