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Leave the cruel night
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Leave the cruel night |
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tacojen Junior Member
since 1999-07-21
Posts 23 |
The sun goes down tarnished in the dusk sinking low to a tune you made up for love.. But it's something crazy your hearing! Not an empty voice from the hollows of your heart.. A loud resounding crash in the black and shiny night. The moon glazes over the inky murk of the sea. Seagulls leave you; in your surprise, stars laugh in your face, the moon weeps in your eyes. -Leave the cruel night- Plunge deep in the tidal waters -A cold dash of sorrow- Bittersweet breezes sweep the last of your dreams away with you. ------------------ Angel Hugs |
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Poet deVine
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Member Seraphic
since 1999-05-26
Posts 22612Hurricane Alley |
This one has some pretty good imagery!  |
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Starith Member
since 1999-08-18
Posts 176Leesburg, FL USA |
A nicely writen peom...nice imagery... |
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LngJhnAg Member Elite
since 1999-07-23
Posts 3508Boot+Kitty=Poetry in motion |
snappin' my fingers, beatnik style, Baby. Yeah... cool, man. I dig this scene your playing in my mind. Dig it, Baby. This was really beat... I loved it. |
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