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ShyGrl135 New Member
since 1999-07-20
Posts 1san Diego |
Go easy on me, I haven't written in a while. -------------------- Blurred Visions, deeper meanings, and greater intentions are what i could not see. Swallowed by an invisable wall for years caused my feelings to be shunned out, pushed aside and easily ignored. Now that, that invisable wall has been lifted my vision has cleared, and my heart and mind have openes. I now realize how much he meant to me now, it's to late to turn back time. The past is the past and the future has yet to come. Will I see him again? I may never know and now its too late to tell him so. All the weight that invisable wall has dropped on me is weighing me down, stealing my stregth, and winning this emotional fight I can't seem to get under control. His memories invade my mind, His touch lingers on my skin, and his voice echos in my ears. I think about him constantly and wonder, if he too, can now see clearly.... ----------------- Heres a Quote: "Of all the sad words of tongue or pen, the saddest are these: it might have been" |
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Delores Hall Member
since 1999-07-16
Posts 342USA |
Welcome shy girl. This is nice for someone who hasn't wrote in a while. |
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Poet deVine
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Member Seraphic
since 1999-05-26
Posts 22612Hurricane Alley |
Welcome to the family! You've got some really great stuff in this poem (one note, you may want to spell check a little)..other wise it's good for someone who's been out of the saddle for awhile...throw us another one!  |
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