Open Poetry #1 |
Salute to JFK, JR. |
~one voice~ Senior Member
since 1999-07-08
Posts 664Billings, MT USA |
They brought him down the aisle, many shedding tears. There were voices singing, everyone remembering your years. A solemn voice cried out, revealing intimacy... I cannot explain what you have meant to me... I saw your actions, I shed tears that were my own... I saw you salute this great man as they laid him to rest, your father, long after you were grown. Now it is said that you are gone...left a world without you. A man that we all loved so much, and now we cannot have you. Your memory is etched in stone, inside my mind... And yet, I never knew you. I wonder what this nation will find without your presence. A fallen favorite prince... your beautiful bride and her dear sister... Another sad tale in this American novel... The dynasty will stay intact, though this heart-breaking tragedy unfolds... As you saluted your father so many years ago, today, I salute you. ©~onevoice~ ------------------ ~onevoice~ "I never kissed somebody so that they would break my heart." |
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wayoutwalt Member Elite
since 1999-06-22
Posts 4870TEXAS (it's all big) |
real good poem tribute miss one voice allthough i feel no pain some are and this will help |
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DreamEvil Member Elite
since 1999-06-22
Posts 2396 |
Very good tribute, how much you care shows. ------------------ Shall I indulge in flights of fancy hampered by clipped wings? DreamEvil© |
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~one voice~ Senior Member
since 1999-07-08
Posts 664Billings, MT USA |
Thanky yuh Walt! ------------------ ~onevoice~ "I never kissed somebody so that they would break my heart." |
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~one voice~ Senior Member
since 1999-07-08
Posts 664Billings, MT USA |
Thank you Dream, although I disagree...I cannot explain what Jon Jon meant to me. ------------------ ~onevoice~ "I never kissed somebody so that they would break my heart." |
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Lost Dreamer Member Elite
since 1999-06-20
Posts 2464Somewhere near the Rainbow |
This is wonderful, so touching. He was a beautiful man with so many dreams left to live, but now he's gone to his creators hand with the company of his wife, and sister-in-law. They will continue to shine on us from above now. |
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Lost Dreamer Member Elite
since 1999-06-20
Posts 2464Somewhere near the Rainbow |
I had to respond back again to ask if I can make a copy of this poem, it just captivated me with the words you wrote. |
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~one voice~ Senior Member
since 1999-07-08
Posts 664Billings, MT USA |
Please do Lost Dreamer... Jon Jon deserves it. ------------------ ~onevoice~ "I never kissed somebody so that they would break my heart." |
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Delores Hall Member
since 1999-07-16
Posts 342USA |
Very nice poem. I think it expresses the way some people feel. |
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Princess Lily Member
since 1999-07-13
Posts 149USA |
Absolutely lovely.He was by far the best kennedy.This was very nice and sweet. ------------------ We see only what we want to see~unless perhaps~we believe *A rose is a rose it withers and dies...so long as you keep it the memories stay alive* |
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angel girl Member
since 1999-07-23
Posts 322within a whisper... |
great job! too bad J.F.K. isn't still here to read this himself. ------------------ The world is in your hands; it is what you make of it. keep on chuggin' |
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Elizabeth
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Member Ascendant
since 1999-06-07
Posts 6871Minnesota |
*Sigh* How sad, yet beautifully written. He's with his parents now. |
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