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DreamEvil Member Elite
since 1999-06-22
Posts 2396 |
I cruise these streets In search of fresh meat. My passions are quite hardcore. I need their fear just to feel complete. Their expressions, I adore. What will it be now, rape, murder, mayhem, all such valid things to do. I'll watch the light in their eyes grow dim. Don't let me catch up to you. I speak With softly hidden deceit, so comforting to your heart. Don't get me wrong, I do not mistreat. It's over before I start. A predator is what I am now, a wolf amongst these sheep. Before it's time for my final bow, I have promises to keep. That delightful scream, will be my dirge, a song that's sung, just for me. Reality and my dreams will merge, as will my insanity. ©1999 DreamEvil ------------------ Shall I indulge in flights of fancy hampered by clipped wings? DreamEvil© [This message has been edited by DreamEvil (edited 07-20-99).] |
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elvira Senior Member
since 1999-07-06
Posts 936California |
going out for a pack of cigarettes now, hope you don't live in California...thanks for the shivers Dream  ------------------ one night at the airport...Childhood Memories...eight short weeks...your countenance...hoarse whispers...My One and Only...Tribute to M.J... serving wench...the mistress...stolen hours...devotion...Master...apart... |
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Alwye
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since 1999-06-16
Posts 3850In the space between moments |
woah, very dark....and extremely good. I like it! ------------------ ..And down from the eternal heavens comes fate's jewelled fingertips, it's magic flowing into awaiting souls..--Krista Knutson *Krista Knutson* |
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~one voice~ Senior Member
since 1999-07-08
Posts 664Billings, MT USA |
These two are right....this one instills the fear! Quite beautifully written though. ------------------ ~onevoice~ "I never kissed somebody so that they would break my heart." |
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Dragon Member
since 1999-07-14
Posts 138Highmount,NY ,USA |
Well done my friend....shall I join you!Love it! |
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DreamEvil Member Elite
since 1999-06-22
Posts 2396 |
Anytime Dragon, anytime. |
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Saxoness
since 1999-07-18
Posts 1102Texas |
Shivers.........literally. you and dragon are a pair.......now I must watch out for you both! ------------------ "Glory remains unaware of my neglected dwelling where alone I sing my tearful song which has charms only for me." -Charles Brugnot |
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DreamEvil Member Elite
since 1999-06-22
Posts 2396 |
The response has been exactly what I hoped for. |
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INclan Senior Member
since 1999-07-20
Posts 1024Indiana, USA |
An interesting presentation......I tend to shoot first and then ask qustions. Are you a poster child for the NRA? |
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Sundance Member
since 1999-07-11
Posts 123 |
Nice, I like it. Look forward to more!  |
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DreamEvil Member Elite
since 1999-06-22
Posts 2396 |
Thank you, both of you. There is more in the works. |
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Gentle Soul Member
since 1999-07-12
Posts 273Vinton,Ohio USA |
I dont know how I missed this poem when replying.. I like it Dream.. ------------------ Gënt£ë¤§°û£ |
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Delores Hall Member
since 1999-07-16
Posts 342USA |
This is scary to think about.I don't think I'll sleep tonight. |
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Nicole Senior Member
since 1999-06-23
Posts 1835Florida |
I have felt the claws of your predator, there are too many of them out on the street. I'm sending this back to the top...watch your backs everyone! Very well written. |
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Phantom Junior Member
since 1999-08-03
Posts 18 |
The more I read of your writings the more I like. ------------------ Open your heart to the Darkness,set your soul free. |
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