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swan Member
since 1999-07-19
Posts 58california, usa |
He said," i've been waiting a long time for you to tell me how you feel" She said," i thought i was in love a few times before, but this time it's for real". She said," your smile is captivating,i'm fascinated by your mind". He said," i'm in heaven with you beside me but were running out of time". She thought, this is crazy, as a tear ran down her cheek, he said," it's alright" and then he could no longer speak. she had made it perfectly clear and he knew what he must do. He said," i never had expected it would be this hard to leave you" So he turned around and walked away, and never did look back. He said to himself," my heart is broken". but her's was still intact. [This message has been edited by swan (edited 07-19-99).] |
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Balladeer
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Member Empyrean
since 1999-06-05
Posts 25505Ft. Lauderdale, Fl USA |
Lemme tell you, swan, I don't know what others may get out of this poem but I consider it nothing short of brilliant because it is so real. There was a girl one time who loved me and I had (chose) to leave her (I being very young and afraid of missing anything). I never forgave her for not taking it as badly as I did! How's that for male logic? Thanks for the trip down memory lane..... |
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