Open Poetry #1 |
I am a prostitute |
beowulf_26 Member
since 1999-06-29
Posts 183 |
Today I learned of humility Of ignorance in "love". I use the term loosely Or at least I did. Given freely as Front lawn flyers. Given in good faith yet, Worthless. A self-inflicted euphoria Obstructing reality. When will I learn? That I'm truly a virgin in truth and a whore of words. |
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Poet deVine
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Member Seraphic
since 1999-05-26
Posts 22612Hurricane Alley |
Welcome! This is very good. I especially liked the last two lines... |
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Balladeer
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Member Empyrean
since 1999-06-05
Posts 25505Ft. Lauderdale, Fl USA |
....given as freely as front lawn flyers... What a wonderfully descriptive phrase! Very nice work. |
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DreamEvil Member Elite
since 1999-06-22
Posts 2396 |
Such lovely Darkness!! Too true of us all. ------------------ Being paranoid is the biggest reason I'm still around to practice my paranoia. DreamEvil© |
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jfreak Member
since 1999-06-17
Posts 306Yuma, AZ, USA |
Very powerful statements here. nice use of imagery with the "flyers" comment and the "whore" comment. I have been guilty of this myself. I watch it now. Well done. Well done. Jfreak |
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