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dimples22 Junior Member
since 1999-07-15
Posts 30 |
Your beautiful, not because of your features nor because of your smile, Your just beautiful. Your beautiful, not because of the unspoken promise of love nor because you shine like a star from up above, Your just beautiful. Your beautiful, not because your essence makes me laugh nor when you look at me with those tear stained eyes. Your just beautiful. Your beautiful because everyday I wake up to see you and I never grow tired of your lovely face Your beautiful because you have filled my life with warmth and grace. I love you more for all the flaws you have because you have made my life beautiful again. Thank you Your beautiful. |
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dimples22 Junior Member
since 1999-07-15
Posts 30 |
I really did enjoy writing this one but it's not for a lover, it's for my beautiful mother. I hope everyone has someone their life who they feel this way about. |
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Ohme Senior Member
since 1999-07-17
Posts 816Texas |
I am guilty of preconcieved notions that at times send me off in the wrong direction. I was seeing a romantic relationship not parent and child. Then you got me back on the right track. So I read it again and yep, that's exactly what it was. Thanks Ohme |
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dimples22 Junior Member
since 1999-07-15
Posts 30 |
Ohme if you feel it's for a romantic relationship then it is, regardless of who it was written for it's nice to know that it inspired somekind of feeling in you, thanks. ------------------ I'm not a writer, just an observer of detail, lol. |
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~one voice~ Senior Member
since 1999-07-08
Posts 664Billings, MT USA |
Definitely a "beautiful" poem! I really liked it...can I show it to my own mother? Thanks once again, dimps for sharing your talent!  ~one voice~ |
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dimples22 Junior Member
since 1999-07-15
Posts 30 |
You can do whatever you like, lol, thanks one voice for supporting me when others can't or will not. |
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dimples21 New Member
since 1999-07-19
Posts 1Freeport,NY,US |
Good job sis, You have talent ,keep it up(I still say I am better,lol) |
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Alwye
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Member Elite
since 1999-06-16
Posts 3850In the space between moments |
Wonderful...I feel like this about my best friends. Truly a piece that can be felt in so many different ways. Great job! |
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Alwye
Moderator
Member Elite
since 1999-06-16
Posts 3850In the space between moments |
Wonderful...I feel like this about my best friends. Truly a piece that can be felt in so many different ways. Great job! ------------------ ..And down from the eternal heavens comes fate's jewelled fingertips, it's magic flowing into awaiting souls..--Krista Knutson *Krista Knutson* |
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dimples22 Junior Member
since 1999-07-15
Posts 30 |
Thank you for all of the support. |
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swilke1 New Member
since 1999-07-19
Posts 5Metamora,IL,USA |
I thought it was wonderful. It made me think of the ones that I love. I want my moter and grandmother to see it. It will give them a smile and a piece mind. I think that my friend needs it too. She is truely a Beautiful person. Thank you for the memories it brought back. swilke1 |
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dimples22 Junior Member
since 1999-07-15
Posts 30 |
I'm so happy t the response I'm getting to this poem, honestly I thought no one would care. ------------------ I'm not a writer, just an observer of detail, lol. |
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dimples22 Junior Member
since 1999-07-15
Posts 30 |
To everyone who reads this, I made a grave error in putting down that no one would care, some people do. |
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