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porowolf
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since 1999-07-15
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colo. spgs. , co, usa

0 posted 1999-07-18 04:10 AM


I just wrote this five minutes ago, because of the harsh reality of facing something I haven't in months, the loss of my best friend.


you where my friend,
my only confidant,
and this is what i do.
I can’t get the feeling of my skin
of what i did to my kin
the thoughts to my head can’t get in
then coming like a freight train
the thoughts flood my brain,

Why did i do her?
shit,
why did i do it?

You said she didn’t mean a thing
no love did you bring
to this little fling.
and her words to my ears
took away all my fears
and your rage grew stronger
for me, your brother
who took the woman you called lover.
but i didn’t know it.
you didn’t express it.
why did i do it?

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