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In Darkness, I Brood
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In Darkness, I Brood |
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Poet deVine
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Member Seraphic
since 1999-05-26
Posts 22612Hurricane Alley |
In darkness, I brood about the task at hand for my death will free this noble land the final walk from this lonely tower will signal more than my final hour The bravest that I will ever be is when I face my eternity blood on my hands, guilt on my soul my death will then make me whole The battle lost, I pay for our sins but who’s to say which of us wins my death will make a martyr of me the price I pay to let men live free Fear flutters in my heart at the last with hooded face, my die is cast trembling, crying, awaiting the shroud I hang before the cheering crowd. (Thanks for the challenge, DreamEvil!) |
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Severn Member Rara Avis
since 1999-07-17
Posts 7704 |
This is really interesting. Is this metaphoric for your own life right now, or a sympathetic look at the the greatest sacrifice? Lovely imagery, fortified by strong, eloquent wording. |
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DreamEvil Member Elite
since 1999-06-22
Posts 2396 |
Anytime, Lady deVine, it was truly a pleasure without compare.  ------------------ Being paranoid is the biggest reason I'm still around to practice my paranoia. DreamEvil© |
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Poet deVine
Administrator
Member Seraphic
since 1999-05-26
Posts 22612Hurricane Alley |
Severn, I was challenged by DreamEvil to write a poem using the phrase: In darkness I brood. This is the result of that challenge. I put it on paper and let my creativity do the rest. I appreciate your comments! Thanks. |
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elvira Senior Member
since 1999-07-06
Posts 936California |
makes me think of british kings, and i do love history  ------------------ Childhood Memories...your countenance...hoarse whispers...My One and Only...Tribute to M.J... serving wench...stolen hours...devotion...Master...apart... |
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