Little girl lost (Hello is anyone out there)

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Little girl lost (Hello is anyone out there)

Delores Hall
Member

since 1999-07-16

Posts 342
USA

0 posted 1999-07-17 03:18 PM

Little girl lost
Who's only five

Where is my mother?
They sent her away,
Insanity robbed her they say.

With so many children
what could she do?
If only she had known
she had everything to lose.

All the demons she had to fight.
Will she remember the little girl plight?

Not even a card,
Not even a letter.
The little girl ask's why
They say she's better.

The year's roll by.
The little girl don't remember,
Of her mother she lost in sixty-nine of December.

She calls her one day.
And say's we can make this better.

Her mother's reply;
You see,when they sent me away,
I lost my children that day.
So go on now,I'm busy today.
I'm sorry to hear that was all she
could say.

She hangs up the phone and turns to
cry,for the mother she lost in sixty-
nine.

Little girl lost
What will she do?
I don't even think she has a clue.

Ohme
Senior Member

since 1999-07-17

Posts 816
Texas

1 posted 1999-07-17 04:54 PM

I feel sympathy for the little girl, lost. But I also feel she survives in spite of the disappointment.

Delores Hall
Member

since 1999-07-16

Posts 342
USA

2 posted 1999-07-19 01:45 PM

Thank you I value your input.

Linda
Junior Member

since 1999-07-19

Posts 11
Puyallup Wa

3 posted 1999-07-19 11:19 PM

Thank you Delores for replying to mine. I feel for this little girl lost. It is nicely written.

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Lindeee

Starfish
Junior Member

since 1999-07-20

Posts 34
New Zealand

4 posted 1999-07-20 06:42 AM

I can feel for the little girl, abandonment is a very sad thing.

Lost Dreamer
Member Elite

since 1999-06-20

Posts 2464
Somewhere near the Rainbow

5 posted 1999-07-20 06:49 AM

Very sad poem, very well written.

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