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HM3
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since 1999-07-15
Posts 169
TX

0 posted 1999-07-17 01:49 PM


Stumbling thru the maze, waiting for your love to shine
Whispers and screams of yesterdays

Wandering in the dark, I need some hope or some help
I could use just a little spark

I have been lost in tears, reaching, searching for your heart
Have I wasted all of these years

Feels like I'm out of time, near the end of the maze
Still the only heart touched is mine

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Work like money doesn't matter, love like you've never been hurt, dance like nobody's watching...

© Copyright 1999 Mark Ozee - All Rights Reserved
Ohme
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since 1999-07-17
Posts 816
Texas
1 posted 1999-07-17 03:18 PM


very nice
elvira
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since 1999-07-06
Posts 936
California
2 posted 1999-07-17 05:09 PM


as i am a rather visual reader, took me a moment to find the meter...but then i truly enjoyed it, looking forward to more


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Childhood Memories...your countenance...hoarse whispers...My One and Only...Tribute to M.J... serving wench...stolen hours...devotion...Master...apart...



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