Open Poetry #1 |
By Darkness Redeemed |
DreamEvil Member Elite
since 1999-06-22
Posts 2396 |
In Darkness I sit avoiding the Light, the burning bright fires of heavenly desires that give me no respite or relief from the pain I seek. In living this life of mine, I find I cannot fault the Darkness for it's harshness nor for it's playing with my fate. Even if I did, it is far, far too late. By word and deed, Darkness has freed me from the straining chains of my own making. Through love and respite, the chains are breaking, despite My fate. My endless night has saved me from an endless flight into suffering and decadent decay. Beauty you see, is attracted to me, just for what my Darkness doth say. Ladies approach ME upon bended knee, just to hear my faintest word and barest whisper. I would shout with glee, grab each one to kiss her, humility prevents me. In one other way has Darkness redeemed, made me more free, a Gentle Soul entered my life, her I help save from strife, she rescues me from being unneeded. Don't rail against the Light, just turn and embrace the Night, with the passion and attraction it has granted me, I say with delight, thank you Lord, for my eternal Night. ©1999 DreamEvil ------------------ Being paranoid is the biggest reason I'm still around to practice my paranoia. DreamEvil© [This message has been edited by DreamEvil (edited 07-17-99).] |
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Dragon Member
since 1999-07-14
Posts 138Highmount,NY ,USA |
You've always been needed.....now you have your focus! Beautiful! |
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Gentle Soul Member
since 1999-07-12
Posts 273Vinton,Ohio USA |
*HUGS* a very good and touching poem Dream.. you are truly one of the nicest guys I know.. and I shall always need you ------------------ Gënt£ë¤§°û£ |
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~one voice~ Senior Member
since 1999-07-08
Posts 664Billings, MT USA |
Amazing...this is very beautiful Dream...and also quite thought provoking... ------------------ ~one voice~ *You are you, and I am I, and if by chance we find each other, it's beautiful.* |
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azblond Senior Member
since 1999-07-01
Posts 637The Steamy Desert |
my reply is simple...loved it. ------------------ For sometimes when the Darkness falls, we must surrender, take what is ours, and give what we can, and always remember love is somewhere waiting... |
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elvira Senior Member
since 1999-07-06
Posts 936California |
love the new formatting of your works ------------------ Childhood Memories...your countenance...hoarse whispers...My One and Only...Tribute to M.J... serving wench...stolen hours...devotion...Master...apart... |
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DreamEvil Member Elite
since 1999-06-22
Posts 2396 |
Just experimenting, thanks though. |
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