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Alwye

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since 1999-06-16

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In the space between moments

0 posted 1999-06-16 05:29 PM

Tiny tendrils of a silver mist swirl and flow,
Sunlight streams and jungle of flowers grow.
Delicate sprites dance on the breeze,
And treasures of gold rest on translucent leaves.

Ribbons of rainfall cascade in the glen,
Unicorns prance and play just around the bend.
Mountains of clouds tumble all around,
And butterflies flit and flutter, heaven bound.

Elfin folk reminisce of time passed long ago,
While wizards and mages reveal the magic they know.
Castles of crystals stand upon hills of green,
And great warriors tell of all they have seen.

Princesses wander, beautiful pearls of grace,
While shining princes persue them, in thrill of the chase.
Dragons of wisdom silently stand,
And are the guardians over this sacred land.

A world of mystery, a land so great,
Filled with kindness, devoid of hate.
A place of love, of treasures unseen,
This is my world, my land of dreams.

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*Krista Knutson*

Nan

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since 1999-05-20

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Cape Cod Massachusetts USA

1 posted 1999-06-16 07:01 PM

Lovely - Simply Lovely

Raven
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since 1999-06-14

Posts 67
Hopewell Jct, New York, USA

2 posted 1999-06-16 10:14 PM

If I ever discover how to capture beauty in its purest form, and transform it into words, I will write poetry from then on 'till the day I die. Until then, I'll remain mystified at how you manage to do just that.

~Raven~

Alwye

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since 1999-06-16

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In the space between moments

3 posted 1999-06-16 11:47 PM

Wow, I am speechless. Thank you so much for the kind words.

Poet deVine

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Hurricane Alley

4 posted 1999-08-14 10:38 AM

Your use of imagery is excellent! For one so young you are SO talented!

Misty Rayne
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since 1999-08-13

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Dassel,Minn.,USA

5 posted 1999-08-14 11:03 AM

Oh,Alwye!! Soooooo beautiful!!!!! Please let me know if I could use this on my homepage of poems? It is a page for mine & that of my poetry-friends,with appropriate jpegs with each poem. Thank-You!!

Alwye

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since 1999-06-16

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In the space between moments

6 posted 1999-08-14 02:12 PM

You most certainly may, Misty. Check your mail, I sent you one regarding that..

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*Krista Knutson*

"If I could be an angel, I'd make your every wish come true. But I am only human, just a woman lovin' you..." Trisha Yearwood

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