Open Poetry #1 |
Obscure at Best |
Sunshine
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Member Empyrean
since 1999-06-25
Posts 63354Listening to every heart |
When writing I try not to be dim, or vague, or filled with uncertainty tho my indistinctness sometimes comes through it was not to hide anything from you. Sometimes, of course, I’m indefinable, ambiguous, shadowy and deep but my unclear thoughts are not concealed or in darkness shall you I keep. And my remote ways when talking of oblivion keep you doubtful nevertheless; but never fear, I’m not double-faced I’m just known for my fuzziness. ~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~ ------------------ Sunshine Words will always express our feelings true. ~~~ KRJ Look, then, into thine heart, and write ~~~ Henry Wadsworth Longfellow |
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since 1999-06-15
Posts 321USA |
good but last line of 2nd stanza sounds forced. |
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