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anonyogi Member
since 1999-07-16
Posts 174United States |
SIT AND TALK I had the greatest time with her today She brought along a friend of hers I guess to chaperone Her heart and mine are all a blur So we really shouldn't be alone Who knows what might happen? All we did was sit and talk The sun was King and the wind was his messenger Bringing us a message of warmth and friendship She has such kind eyes And she calls me handsome But I'm too shy to tell her I think she is beautiful And she's too shy to tell me she knows that I think She is beautiful So all we do is sit and talk. And for once I may leave it that way. Why? Because the Minute you say you love someone, you Tell them they are no longer good enough Something has to change--something that is never you Someone or something has to go or you will go We can never, ever, ever love people for Who they really are, Only for who we want them to be. So that means, that if All we can do right now is Sit and Talk In order to keep things perfect In order for us both to have our fantasies about What could be If And Only If or What Could Come, You Never Know Then I will not do one thing To spoil the fun that we are having. So for now, All that she and I will do is Sit and Talk. And when she Looks at me with those rosewood eyes And I hear her laugh trickle like a brook I will for that moment know what it Means to be happy. NOTE: Other stuff on my website is NOT so gentle. I've got a disclaimer at the top of it so be warned, Okay????? ------------------ Anonymous Web Poet |
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Poet deVine
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Member Seraphic
since 1999-05-26
Posts 22612Hurricane Alley |
Welcome to the family! I thought this poem was good, so as I do with every new poet, I went to your web site. I think you made it clear that the site is not for anyone under 18, which is good. What I read was interesting. The poem "Animal" was disturbing to me, though well done, only because of the content. I would ask that if you decide to post any of those here, you would ask for permission to post on the adult forum, as that is where they belong. Again, welcome. Enjoy yourself here!  |
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anonyogi Member
since 1999-07-16
Posts 174United States |
Disturbed you? How do you think I felt???? I was thinking it!!!!! I think I have some things I need to work out, and the poetry helps, along with my recent interest in Zen. The Zen idea of noticing thoughts as a means of letting them go is actually working for me. There will be more dark poems and light ones, sent to their appropriate forums, of course. ------------------ Anonymous Web Poet |
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