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Open Poetry #1

What is your forever?

mia
Member

since 1999-07-06

Posts 118

0 posted 1999-07-16 01:29 PM

I try to see inside you
to think your thoughts
to feel your love
I need to know
what you dream of
when I close my eyes
later than now
are we
the two of us
is it
for sure
can I trust you
with my heart
what is your forever?

[This message has been edited by mia (edited 07-16-99).]

armanca
Member

since 1999-07-07

Posts 211
Tennessee

1 posted 1999-07-16 05:13 PM

mia,
I loved this poem. This describes exactly how I feel with my new boyfriend...after breaking off a 4 year relationship with another. It makes you wonder about promising forever...and what it means to each person.

carman

blueloon
Member

since 1999-07-07

Posts 161
NY

2 posted 1999-07-16 05:16 PM

everyone's forever has a diferent timeline. Scary isn't it? I enjoy your work mia.
blueloon

Andrew Scott
Member Elite

since 1999-06-24

Posts 2558
Redlands,CA,USA

3 posted 1999-07-16 05:37 PM

A simple poem with a complex question. Well presented. My answer to she who holds my heart: "I love you forever, a time that will never come."

Mokagrl14
Junior Member

since 1999-07-15

Posts 12
Cape Coral, Fl, USA

4 posted 1999-07-16 08:33 PM

Thats a great poem, Mia. Ur a bright poet!

Krista :O)

Sundance
Member

since 1999-07-11

Posts 123

5 posted 1999-07-16 08:39 PM

Very wonderful poem! It expresses the way I feel sometimes with people. Keep up the good work!!!:0

armanca
Member

since 1999-07-07

Posts 211
Tennessee

6 posted 1999-07-16 10:33 PM

Just had to write again. I asked my boyfriend (hope you don't mind, "what is your forever?" He said, "My forever is in you."

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