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I'm No Hero
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I'm No Hero |
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DreamEvil Member Elite
since 1999-06-22
Posts 2396 |
I'm no hero, though I've always wanted to be. I respect the ladies and love them dearly, yet I nearly look in them to see what they have forbidden to me. A swelling breast, the gentle rise of their mound, the delight of bedroom eyes, are what I've found to be an invaluable prize. Though true to say their mind is my greatest find. I lust like any other man, more so, I merely keep in mind the truly important things in my life, whomever I know, in spite of the strife in my life. 'Tis truly so. If I tried to flirt, I'd lose my shirt and the respect my friends have for me. I'd lose all that I've built so painstakingly. In fact, I believe, my rating in that is zero. I'm no hero. I just try to be kind whenever I find someone walking the path that led me to despair. Check the math, too many are already there. I can't abide the feeling inside where compassion Used to reside. I'm no Hero. ©1999 DreamEvil ------------------ I am not responsible for how you choose to interpret what I say. DreamEvil© |
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leelew Member
since 1999-07-10
Posts 89highmount,ny,usa |
Your are a hero,and always will be.You show that with each and every life you touch...like you have touched mine. |
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DreamEvil Member Elite
since 1999-06-22
Posts 2396 |
------------------ I am not responsible for how you choose to interpret what I say. DreamEvil© |
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Gentle Soul Member
since 1999-07-12
Posts 273Vinton,Ohio USA |
Dream, you are a hero.. I know you tell me I give you too much credit, and I pulled myself out.. but if you wasnt there when you was there.. I would have slipped deeper into where I was.. and that I have to thank you.. maybe I did do it myself.. but you was the nudge that got me going.. ------------------ Gënt£ë¤§°û£ |
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Wilsonlee New Member
since 1999-07-14
Posts 5Bukit Batok,Singapore |
Dream, your poems are great and well written. It is an honour to be reading the poems you have written. ------------------ Willy the lovelorn poet |
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Augchic711 Member
since 1999-06-17
Posts 80O'Fallon, IL, USA |
You are a wonderful man it sounds like and a wonderful poet as well! Thank you for sharing your poem with me i really appreciated it!!! Good luck dreamevil ------------------ *******Augchic711******* |
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~one voice~ Senior Member
since 1999-07-08
Posts 664Billings, MT USA |
You amaze with how wonderful you truly are, yet you never see it. What will it take for someone to help you see? You are MY hero! Regardless of your past experiences, up until now, you simply have not found someone who loves you for you; for who you are. In the end, that's all that matters. You are a hero, in every meaning of the word. ------------------ ~one voice~ *You are you, and I am I, and if by chance we find each other, it's beautiful.* |
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DreamEvil Member Elite
since 1999-06-22
Posts 2396 |
Thank you all, especially one voice who humbles me. |
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azblond Senior Member
since 1999-07-01
Posts 637The Steamy Desert |
And to whom was he seen a Hero? The mirror spoke not to he, but those whom he touched, those whom he loved, a hero is all he could be. Words fell short to describe him in any other form, So there my friend in simple words, that's how a Hero is born. ------------------ For sometimes when the Darkness falls, we must surrender, take what is ours, and give what we can, and always remember love is somewhere waiting... |
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DreamEvil Member Elite
since 1999-06-22
Posts 2396 |
I don't have a ready word so I'll chance being misheard or absurd, means much azblond. |
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Sunshine
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Member Empyrean
since 1999-06-25
Posts 63354Listening to every heart |
You hide your true self behind a false name. I can see the "real" you coming out. Allow it, and growth, and love, will find you. ------------------ Sunshine Words will always express our feelings true. ~~~ KRJ Look, then, into thine heart, and write ~~~ Henry Wadsworth Longfellow |
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Nina New Member
since 1999-07-15
Posts 7memphis,tn usa |
Your words are truly gifted my friend. Nina |
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Ladycat 
since 1999-07-05
Posts 782At the edge and a doorway,TX |
We make the hero that's inside We hide behind the mask Who's to know what dwells below Dream Evil has a grasp Wonderfully written piece.. Love, Lady ------------------ Live in my world just once and you'll find yourself enraptured. |
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