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Open Poetry #1

Alone

Dragon
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since 1999-07-14

Posts 138
Highmount,NY ,USA

0 posted 1999-07-14 03:58 PM

[This message has been edited by Dragon (edited 07-23-99).]

jfreak
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since 1999-06-17

Posts 306
Yuma, AZ, USA

1 posted 1999-07-15 05:56 PM

I must say that the poem is well written and I like the use of repitition with darkness. You are talented. Yet if you truly feel this way then I must say you are one mistaken wretch. Being alone is never good. We need others in our lives, close to us. Those are the people that test our character or instill it in us. I feel sorry for you if you truly feel this way b/c there is no positives with being alone.

Jfreak

Dragon
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since 1999-07-14

Posts 138
Highmount,NY ,USA

2 posted 1999-07-16 09:53 AM

Thank-You.This is my first attempt at writing.And this is what I was feeling at the time.But this too shall pass.Painful.

wayoutwalt
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since 1999-06-22

Posts 4870
TEXAS (it's all big)

3 posted 1999-07-16 10:44 AM

i like this poem too tells of the inner soul of dragon i too agree darkness is bad but i like you say this too shall pass..let your heart be an open book dragon thank you

Dragon
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since 1999-07-14

Posts 138
Highmount,NY ,USA

4 posted 1999-07-16 08:21 PM

THis Dragon is just find it has a soul.old and tarnished but there still the same.THanks

Dragon
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since 1999-07-14

Posts 138
Highmount,NY ,USA

5 posted 1999-07-23 11:50 AM

I have deleted this poem

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