Open Poetry #1 |
Don't Forget....A Reoccuring Memory Speaks |
Temptress
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Member Rara Avis
since 1999-06-15
Posts 7136Mobile, AL |
Let me be free, To roam the wild winds, And dance upon the autumn leaves, Riding them like my own magic carpets. Let me cling to the bare branches, In the winter chill, Freezing, alone, and desolate, Watching the gleeful snowflakes romp. Let me blossom in reminiscent perfume, Filling your senses in rare moments, Always there in the shadows, When you need tenderness to hold to. Let me melt away beneath summer skies, Collecting in a puddle at your feet, Wondering why we grow distant, When the days get longer. |
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Alwye
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Member Elite
since 1999-06-16
Posts 3850In the space between moments |
This is incredibly beautiful...you have touched my heart. You are truly talented, Temptress. ------------------ ..And down from the eternal heavens comes fate's jeweled fingertips, it's magic flowing into awaiting souls..--Krista Knutson *Krista Knutson* |
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wayoutwalt Member Elite
since 1999-06-22
Posts 4870TEXAS (it's all big) |
very nice temptress you are so skilled |
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Poet deVine
Administrator
Member Seraphic
since 1999-05-26
Posts 22612Hurricane Alley |
A poem this lovely belongs at the top... |
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Alwye
Moderator
Member Elite
since 1999-06-16
Posts 3850In the space between moments |
Another lift up for a beautiful piece... ------------------ *Krista Knutson* "Your kiss upon my face feels like a brush with grace, baby thats all it takes to take me higher..." SHeDaisy |
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angel girl Member
since 1999-07-23
Posts 322within a whisper... |
i normally don't like poems that don't rhyme, but this was truly amazing and i really liked it. ------------------ delight in the little things. |
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Moonlight Romeo
since 2001-09-10
Posts 982The heart of you |
I find much truth here, and much doubt about things. Even then. This is my own life, in a way, that you've captured here. Thank you. What light through yon window breaks? It is the east, and Juliet is the sun. |
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passing shadows Member Empyrean
since 1999-08-26
Posts 45577displaced |
*sigh* |
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bsquirrel
since 2000-01-03
Posts 7855 |
All right. Do so. |
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passing shadows Member Empyrean
since 1999-08-26
Posts 45577displaced |
well look who's running around, digging up stuff now... |
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Elie Junior Member
since 2003-02-04
Posts 14New York, USA |
Lovely poem. Elie |
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Brad Majors
since 2001-04-03
Posts 2647Georgia |
beautifully done |
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