Open Poetry #1 |
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Shadowland Lady Responds |
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Poet deVine
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Member Seraphic
since 1999-05-26
Posts 22612Hurricane Alley |
I did not intend to live this way always on the periphery having him only part time and hiding all my misery Sometimes I feel nothing, don’t think it’s my right; eyes open, I started this but it’s cold comfort late at night. I see him with his wife as I peer around the door tenderly he takes her arm to lead her across the floor. In my life there is no winner; losing is the game I play and I know there’ll come a time there will be dues to pay. I didn’t choose to love him and now, he’s caught me here no where to go, no place to hide living for him in fear. Last week I saw him looking at a girl just have his age and now I wonder when she’ll find herself in this cage. Yes, I stay among the shadows hidden from society branded by the simple act of my adultery. |
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Balladeer
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Member Empyrean
since 1999-06-05
Posts 25505Ft. Lauderdale, Fl USA |
How lucky a man would be to have you on the side, not to mention all the other..,ah, never mind. Good response, deVine one! |
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Elizabeth![]() ![]()
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Member Ascendant
since 1999-06-07
Posts 6871Minnesota |
Boy does that guy sound like a womanizer! Too bad there are so many like him. ![]() |
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Balladeer
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since 1999-06-05
Posts 25505Ft. Lauderdale, Fl USA |
You wrong me greatly, Elizabethian one. Poet deVine and I are great friends and can speak to each other in that manner based on our close friendship. Jumping to conclusions is not necessary a good aerobics exercise. |
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Elizabeth![]() ![]()
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since 1999-06-07
Posts 6871Minnesota |
How right you are when you say, "Jumping to conclusions is not a good aerobics exercise." When I made the womanizer comment, I was talking about the guy in the poem. I could tell you were kidding around with Poet deVine,sorry about the misunderstanding. ![]() |
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Balladeer
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Member Empyrean
since 1999-06-05
Posts 25505Ft. Lauderdale, Fl USA |
My face is red. I will attempt to follow my own advice in the future. |
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elvira Senior Member
since 1999-07-06
Posts 936California |
being the "other woman" can be hurtful at times, that is true ------------------ If I had my mouth I would bite. If I had my liberty I would do my liking. In the mean time, let me be that I am, and seek not to alter me. ~~~Shakespeare~~~ |
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