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Open Poetry #1

happiness tied

grandiloquent
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since 1999-07-08

Posts 104
Midwest America

0 posted 1999-07-12 08:37 PM

This tight, small feeling
~ happiness tied ~
letting them
{words, someone else’s visions}
strip me in ways
where I decide I like this – the rhythm,
the directive,
his spectacle of words.
I decide, again, he has talent.
Much more than me
(contemplate: jealousy bursts,
simmers,
pretends to disappear)
A few lines catch me with
little tingling hooks
my anonymous emotion
like a crush for inanimate objects
-- a beautiful woman’s skin -- my bedroom
-- these fantastic poems I’m reading -- a snap from perspective
all summed from this delight-sided knot in my chest
-- like anxiety having an orgasm.

[This message has been edited by grandiloquent (edited 07-25-99).]

Sunshine

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Member Empyrean

since 1999-06-25

Posts 63354
Listening to every heart

1 posted 1999-07-13 05:29 PM

Sounds like you've been reading so much of everyone else's work, you're lost for words.

Cute.

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Sunshine

Words will always express our feelings true.
KRJ

snuffleupagus
Junior Member

since 1999-07-15

Posts 11

2 posted 1999-07-15 01:22 PM

i think the thoughts here are too jumbled. i found myself having to go back and reread what i just read, trying to make sense of it.

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