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Open Poetry #1

to all those cameras

mia
Member

since 1999-07-06

Posts 118

0 posted 1999-07-12 12:26 PM

will you leave the man alone
so he can undo his pain
so he can uncry our tears
that you have brought forth

will you let the man be
so he can find reason
so he can love us once more
now that you have destroyed him

will you forget the man
that he has been
that he still is
after you have defeated him

will you go away
without taking him with you
so he can live
what remains of his pride

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This is not my best work I was just really angry with the papers this morning. Impulsive writing... Sorry I took up space in the forum with this one.

Mia

Ladycat

Senior Member

since 1999-07-05

Posts 782
At the edge and a doorway,TX

1 posted 1999-07-12 12:33 PM

I like it.. Deep.. Keep up the good work..

Love,
Lady

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