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Open Poetry #1
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4eqinox2leanne0
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since 1999-07-12
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whitmore
0 posted 1999-07-12 01:52 AM

my love
taste of my body; sip of my soul
inhale my want need love for you
alone
please
allow
me to drown in your midnight
ocean eyes
to die for your sweet love
my love
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mia
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since 1999-07-06
Posts 118
1 posted 1999-07-12 09:22 AM

I really like it. Short and simple yet so inexplicably complicated...

"taste of my body;sip of my soul"
that is really deep. I like your free verse style.

Show me more!!!
mia
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