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Margaret New Member
since 1999-06-15
Posts 3 |
Reality is that slap in the face When you think you have the world by the tail And life seems to be moving at your own pace When you feel like there is no way you can fail. Reality is there to open your eyes When you find you were walking with them closed And it shows you a site that can make you cry Because with reality, it shows you what you already know. Reality keeps me in a state of mind That I know it has complete control But sometimes my dreams overtake reality I find And love lives for a while in my heart and soul Reality is not fair. Reality does not care. |
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darkness_witch Senior Member
since 2003-12-03
Posts 516Underneath |
I dont know if you'll get this or not, but anyway. I love this poem love it as simple as that. This is atrully spcetacular poem. I have just joined piptalk, at the end of 2003 really. But this has been one of the best choices ive made. I feel im on the brink of depression some days, and othgers I feel nothing. But piptalk is always there. Ive come into the archives to see if poetry here has changed, and Im sad to say it has. I am sure I havent seen you round here before, and I fear you may have given up on it. I say plz dont, plz come back and post more of your amazing stuff. I would love to read it. yours darkness You can always hear a tear in Cobain's voice, the pain going on there is always visible through his lyrics - Marilon Manson |
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Nan
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Member Seraphic
since 1999-05-20
Posts 21191Cape Cod Massachusetts USA |
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