Open Poetry #1 |
i loved loving you |
amber Member
since 1999-06-15
Posts 240los banos, ca, |
your voice was so sweet, the sincerist apology, i had to let you go despite the feelings inside me, your hand wiped away the tears, that i never shouldve cried, finally letting go of my fears, i have to stop hurting this time, i loved loving you, the nights that we shared, but i always knew, your heart was never there, ill miss missing you, everytime you walk away, tears in my eyes, begging you to stay, i need to stop needing you, because its breaking my heart, i love you to much, to let you tear me apart, ive given you everything, but its still not enough, it hurts to say goodbye, but i cant live in this onesided love. |
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Leigh Anne Junior Member
since 1999-06-15
Posts 48Scottsboro, AL USA |
Been there where you were when you wrote this poem! Very vivid and familiar! Great job! |
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Artic Wind Member Rara Avis
since 2007-09-16
Posts 8080Realm of Supernatural |
Romantic ARCTIC WIND |
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