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azblond
Senior Member

since 1999-07-01

Posts 637
The Steamy Desert

0 posted 1999-07-10 05:42 PM

Another Dream

Have you ever had a dream
That you wanted so bad to be true
I had one so very real
It was about me and you
We were together so happily
Your girl a thing of the past
We shared a love so sweet and true
And I hoped it would last
I know it was only a dream
But it revealed feelings I had
You made me so happy
When before I was so sad
I should know better than to believe
A dream that could never be right
But inside I hoped and prayed
That just somehow it might
My dream now has ended
With the sad reality
She’s the one you love so true
And it never will be me.

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Let my words fall first upon deaf ears before a closed mind...

tori
Senior Member

since 1999-06-18

Posts 520
Mechanicsville, Maryland, USA

1 posted 1999-07-10 07:36 PM

A Dream so true Az... One I think many have shared....Good work!

Dragoness
Senior Member

since 1999-08-07

Posts 513

2 posted 1999-08-10 05:23 AM

Well done AZ.

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Set you heart free and your mind will follow.

angel girl
Member

since 1999-07-23

Posts 322
within a whisper...

3 posted 1999-08-10 07:48 AM

wow, this brought up a few memories for me. i regret not being able to be with the person i want to be with, we are still good friends and i treasure that. even though it hurts terribly not being able to be with HIM like i want, i'm glad i know him.
this was very good.

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delight in the little things.

suthern

Member Seraphic

since 1999-07-29

Posts 20723
Louisiana

4 posted 1999-08-10 08:35 AM

I'm sorry your dreams didn't come true... nice poem!

Sue
Member

since 1999-08-04

Posts 383
France

5 posted 1999-08-10 09:06 AM

If you go on having dreams, one day one of them will come true.

azblond
Senior Member

since 1999-07-01

Posts 637
The Steamy Desert

6 posted 1999-08-11 10:13 AM

wow...all the positive response...thank you! This piece was actually in my archive of High School poems...written on old paper that is now yellowing...The reminder that sometimes dreams don't come true for a reason!

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For sometimes when the Darkness falls, we must surrender, take what is ours, and give what we can, and always remember love is somewhere waiting...

RosePetal

Member Elite

since 2001-08-26

Posts 2985
South Florida

7 posted 2002-02-11 07:06 PM

nice poem. Enjoyed it

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