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Nocturnal Kiss
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Nocturnal Kiss |
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azblond Senior Member
since 1999-07-01
Posts 637The Steamy Desert 
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Nocturnal Kiss The silence is eerie I’m late… did he leave? He asked me to meet him At the start of the eve My eyes are adjusting To the lack of light The hairs on my arms Are standing in fright The darkness is deafening No sound does escape Then suddenly I glimpse His signature cape Why does he not speak If he is already here? Is he enjoying Seeing my fear? I call out his name But receive no reply Then I feel his cold hand And I finally sigh I laugh at my terror Afraid of the night! Then my senses all leave Some things not right… He’s kissing my neck But his caress is so sharp From somewhere there’s music The sound…a harp? But this could not be real In this day and age When reggae and hip hop Are all the rage I’m growing weak From his sweet kiss I raise my hand Wait…what is this? The stain on my neck Where his lips had been I cannot believe This has happened! I awake to the eve My senses are tight To the ever clear fact I no longer live in the light. ------------------ Let my words fall first upon deaf ears before a closed mind... |
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Poetwheel Member
since 1999-07-07
Posts 208Canada |
Excellent vampire piece! I have an old friend who teached gothic fiction, I'm going to show her this one...she'll eat it up! PW ------------------ Poetic Wheelbarrow http://sites.netscape.net/poetwheel |
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azblond Senior Member
since 1999-07-01
Posts 637The Steamy Desert |
I'm glad you enjoyed it...I love to write these tales! ------------------ Let my words fall first upon deaf ears before a closed mind... |
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thursdayschild Member
since 1999-07-01
Posts 169Houston, Tx. |
spooky! I like this! Thanks for sharing. |
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elvira Senior Member
since 1999-07-06
Posts 936California |
simply marvelous...i imagined gary oldman as "dracul" while reading it...thanks for the delightful shivers down my spine  ------------------ i never call a poem "nice" or such, for that would not be saying much |
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DreamEvil Member Elite
since 1999-06-22
Posts 2396 |
Inspired by me? No, my dear, you are inspiring me!! ------------------ I am not responsible for how you choose to interpret what I say. DreamEvil© |
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azblond Senior Member
since 1999-07-01
Posts 637The Steamy Desert |
Flattery will get you all everything you need!! Thanks for the kind words...DreamEvil, I think we make quite a duo then! ------------------ Let my words fall first upon deaf ears before a closed mind... |
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