Open Poetry #1 |
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Blind As a Bat© |
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Genea Member
since 1999-06-15
Posts 321USA |
He whispered in my ear And I lost track of time. He held me in his arms And I forgot you are mine. He looked into my eyes I gave into romance. I was swept away so fast My heart never had a chance. Often I think back He didn’t even try To hide his many faults Or cover his many lies. I was blind as a bat I thought I knew him well Silent as a cat creeping into my heart When? I could not tell. I see the real him now I know I was wrong To listen to his melody And try to sing along. |
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Christina Myers Member
since 1999-06-21
Posts 159 |
I like the momentuem in this one...brings up a very good sense of betrayal... good job! -C |
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Genea Member
since 1999-06-15
Posts 321USA |
Christina, That is exactly what i was trying to portray in this piece...the betrayal!! So glad it came thru! ~Genea |
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