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Open Poetry #1

ocean blue

mia
Member

since 1999-07-06

Posts 118

0 posted 1999-07-08 02:40 PM

i want to ride the waves
of your ocean blue
until i can drown
in your love

ocean blue,
where the distance is near
where the feeling is clear

ocean blue,
where the sky and water make love
where touches come from up above

ocean blue,
where time stands still
where you always will

ocean blue,
where lovers yearn
where passions burn

i want to ride the waves
of your ocean blue
until i can drown
in your love

mia

[This message has been edited by mia (edited 07-08-99).]

Balladeer

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Member Empyrean

since 1999-06-05

Posts 25505
Ft. Lauderdale, Fl USA

1 posted 1999-07-08 02:59 PM

A very nice sentiment here......

Emmy
Member

since 1999-06-29

Posts 194
KY

2 posted 1999-07-08 03:48 PM

Beautiful.

I have oceans of my own that I would love to ride the waves of, so I know exactly what you mean. And your rhyming is excellent for someone who's first language is not english! You seem like a very accomplished poet. Looking forward to seeing more...
~~~ Emmmy ~~~

mia
Member

since 1999-07-06

Posts 118

3 posted 1999-07-09 07:58 AM

Emmy, you give me too much credit for I am not an accomplished poet but a mear dreamer who's head is filled with millions of words. writing words for me is a sort of release.
thanks for the nice comments...

and Balladeer... thank you for the comment, it is a real honor for me that you took the time to comment.

M

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