Open Poetry #1 |
In Her Sleep |
sea_of_okc Senior Member
since 1999-06-15
Posts 568Oklahoma City, OK, USA |
Her eyes are closed, her breath is sweet I watch her in her sleep Her hair it spreads in disarray My love for her runs deep Her nose is pert, her skin is soft So perfect to caress Of all the women on the earth By far she is the best Her lips so full, so red, so moist Made for me to kiss Her legs are strong, her fingers long Her hands on me is bliss Her curves so sleek, her body tight The taste of her is wine She brings to me such happiness I can't believe she's mine Her waist is slim, her stomach flat As perfect as can be I lie awake the whole night through And hold her close to me She slowly stirs beneath the sheets I watch her in her sleep She wakes up and looks at me My love for her runs deep ------------------ Steven Seaman |
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Genea Member
since 1999-06-15
Posts 321USA |
When i began reading this, i thought it was about a child sleeping, but then it got more erotic, and i realized it was not. Great poem tho. |
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elvira Senior Member
since 1999-07-06
Posts 936California |
sounds like you found the (physically only?) perfect woman indeed ------------------ Childhood Memories...your countenance...hoarse whispers...My One and Only...Tribute to M.J... serving wench...stolen hours...devotion...Master...apart... |
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swilke1 New Member
since 1999-07-19
Posts 5Metamora,IL,USA |
you have captured a lot of thoughts and feelings I have. I know the place, I go there all the time. She must too be a great woman. great peom! |
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Sally S. Senior Member
since 1999-06-07
Posts 847Ohio |
I missed this one before....sigh. It's very touching. Lucky girl! (oh....and lucky you too) |
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seaslady Junior Member
since 1999-06-25
Posts 43 |
Yes sea... she is a lucky girl... I hope she appreciates your words... |
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Sue Member
since 1999-08-04
Posts 383France |
A very lucky girl, to have someone feel like that about her and be able to express it so beautifully. [This message has been edited by Sue (edited 08-07-99).] |
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