Poetic Passions - pipTalk Forums

How to Join	Member's Area	Private Library	Search	Sanctuary		Login
Main Forums	Discussion	Tech Talk	Mature Content	Archives	A home without a wall, Our haven without ends, A circle we all call Our Family of Friends!

Poet deVine

Administrator

Member Seraphic

since 1999-05-26

Posts 22612
Hurricane Alley

0 posted 1999-07-06 11:09 PM

You take pen in hand
and I sigh.

Holding my breath
you know why.

The words you cannot
say to me

Come from your pen
most eloquently.

I wait to read
words you never speak

Words that thrill me
and leave me weak

Your truth is pure
your soul sublime

I hunger for each
loving rhyme

And though our bodies
never meet

I’ve felt your touch
in your words, my sweet.

IsabelleSkye
Member

since 1999-06-27

Posts 253

1 posted 1999-07-06 11:12 PM

DeVine.....
I have been there, and AM there.
WOW you have such talent!
Thanks for being a great part of this place
Izzy

Sally S.
Senior Member

since 1999-06-07

Posts 847
Ohio

2 posted 1999-07-06 11:18 PM

How lovely. What a beautiful sentiment. Nicely done, Poet.

Balladeer

Administrator

Member Empyrean

since 1999-06-05

Posts 25505
Ft. Lauderdale, Fl USA

3 posted 1999-07-06 11:21 PM

deVine one, this is truly beautifully done. No words wasted and the meaning loud and clear. Excellent job!

Sunshine

Administrator

Member Empyrean

since 1999-06-25

Posts 63354
Listening to every heart

4 posted 1999-07-07 09:03 AM

Dear Poet o'mine
it is not simply your words that rhyme
for your soul sings aloud in time
and to that height we wish to climb.

I've been on the other end of this complaint
with a mate who shows no restraint
he cannot understand why the words flow on
nor why I need to release them before I'm gone.

No romantic bone in his body true
He is more meat and potatoes; I'm the stew
He is black and white, and I see a lot of grey
So I'm glad you are here, to make my day.

------------------
Sunshine

Words will always express our feelings true.
KRJ

sea_of_okc
Senior Member

since 1999-06-15

Posts 568
Oklahoma City, OK, USA

5 posted 1999-07-07 09:09 AM

Ahhh deVine one, this is lovely! I hope my lady feels like this about the things I write for her

Thank you for sharing your very touching verse with us :P <<<--- there's a thrill for ya... HA!!

Hey!!! why doesn't a P make a face with the tongue sticking out????? That is just not right!!!

[This message has been edited by sea_of_okc (edited 07-07-99).]

hoot_owl_rn
Member Patricius

since 1999-07-05

Posts 10750
Glen Hope, PA USA

6 posted 1999-07-07 09:10 AM

Very nice piece........ah, could we all be so fortunate!

passing shadows
Member Empyrean

since 1999-08-26

Posts 45577
displaced

7 posted 2003-01-04 04:35 AM

*sigh* *smile*

timothysangel1973

Senior Member

since 2001-12-03

Posts 1725
Never close enough

8 posted 2005-04-23 01:31 AM

Gosh... how come I never found this till now (probably had something to do with me not ever looking I'm sure lol)

Anyhoo.... this is so strong and beautiful...much loved m'friend

Tima

LadyTom
Member

since 2008-02-29

Posts 353
LA, CA

9 posted 2008-03-07 05:34 PM

Beautiful!!

	⇧ top of page ⇧
All times are ET (US). All dates are in Year-Month-Day format.