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invertigo18
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since 1999-06-14
Posts 53
Prairieville, LA., USA

0 posted 1999-06-15 02:40 PM


When I look at you it makes me think:
Where did I go wrong?
When I stare at you it makes me think:
If I stare at you too long

Will you hate me?
Will you love me?
Are you always gonna pull and shove me?
I think you feel it too.
I can see it in your eyes.
But you love him and my heart you despise.

Baby
I'm crazy about you.
Baby
I can't live without you.
And sometimes it makes me sad
When I think of what I could've had
If I would've loved you right
I'd still have you now.

The way you look at me girl
Gets under my skin.
And the way that my heart beats girl
I could just sin.

Do you hate me?
Do you love me?
Are you always gonna pull and shove me?
I think you feel it too.
I can see it in your eyes.
But you love him and my heart you despise.

Baby
I'm crazy about you.
Baby
I can't live without you.
And sometimes it makes me sad
When I think of what I could've had.
If I would've loved you right.
I'd still have you now.

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Luke Cakalic

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sea_of_okc
Senior Member
since 1999-06-15
Posts 568
Oklahoma City, OK, USA
1 posted 1999-06-15 05:16 PM


Seems as though these should be lyrics to a song... too bad I have no musical talent
Artic Wind
Member Rara Avis
since 2007-09-16
Posts 8080
Realm of Supernatural
2 posted 2007-11-12 09:45 PM


Enjoyed

ARCTIC WIND

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