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The Forest |
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Tim Senior Member
since 1999-06-08
Posts 1794 |
He stood alone Amidst the tranquil wonder of the forest An unsatisfied yearning To be touched by the freshening breeze Would he hear The intonations of the whispering wind And be sated? Enveloped by the magnetic charms of the wild? He felt the gentle touch of Silken lips Softly pressed against his brow Soothing warmth Of elfin graces and earthly splendor. He had sought Beneath the heaven's shining stars And he found Amongst the forest, amid the feral creatures Hearts desire. [This message has been edited by Tim (edited 07-27-99).] |
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Poet deVine
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since 1999-05-26
Posts 22612Hurricane Alley |
Tim, for a desert dweller, this poem was manna from heaven! I could smell the pines! Nicely done! |
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thursdayschild Member
since 1999-07-01
Posts 169Houston, Tx. |
Lovely poem Tim. Really enjoyed it, thanks! |
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Delores Hall Member
since 1999-07-16
Posts 342USA |
Tim wonderful poem.Happy writing. |
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Nan
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Member Seraphic
since 1999-05-20
Posts 21191Cape Cod Massachusetts USA |
...and there you have it!! a writer who does exceptional structured poetry who also has an innate gift for free verse... It's all in the imagery, folks  Very nice, Tim  |
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Balladeer
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since 1999-06-05
Posts 25505Ft. Lauderdale, Fl USA |
Tim, this is the best construction I've seen from you. You made every word count and blended them beautifully.  [This message has been edited by Balladeer (edited 08-14-99).] [This message has been edited by Balladeer (edited 08-14-99).] |
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Lost Dreamer Member Elite
since 1999-06-20
Posts 2464Somewhere near the Rainbow |
Tim, This was delightful. |
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