i need a poem written, or at least suggestions

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i need a poem written, or at least suggestions

ncf31088
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since 2003-02-08

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0 posted 2003-02-09 07:02 PM

Ok there is this girl, Her name is Lisa. we've been going out for almost a month now. I need some suggestions for a poem to write for her. She is the most perfect girl ive ever met. she is unbelievebly beautiful and she smells like a rose (but better). i love her so much. Her eyes are big, blue, and very beautiful and her hair is silky smooth. everything is perfect about her. can someone give me some ideas? thanx.

ncf31088
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since 2003-02-08

Posts 4

1 posted 2003-02-09 07:08 PM

This is what i have, suggestions are highly appreciated:

You are the most perfect person ive ever met. you are unbelievebly beautiful and you smell like a rose (but better). i love you so much. your eyes are so beautiful and your hair is smooth like silk. everything is perfect about you. And i cant believe you chose me to be the lucky guy as your boyfriend. I love you baby. i love you more than anything.

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Member Rara Avis

since 1999-05-19

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2 posted 2003-02-09 08:38 PM

Since this is more of a request for suggestions, rather than a suggestion, I'm moving it to the Lounge. I suspect it'll get a much better response there.

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