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Lost Dreamer Member Elite
since 1999-06-20
Posts 2464Somewhere near the Rainbow 
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Shadows Honesty bellowing breaking apart casting shadows displaying doubt quivering soul drowning alone Yearning affection churning tides washed ashore shadows depart evolving heart concurs doubt standing strong dream embraced |
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hoot_owl_rn Member Patricius
since 1999-07-05
Posts 10750Glen Hope, PA USA |
What a nice sequence of words...going from dispear to hope. I liked it ------------------ "In the depths of winter, I finally learned that there was in me an invincible summer" ~Albert Camus |
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Lost Dreamer Member Elite
since 1999-06-20
Posts 2464Somewhere near the Rainbow |
Thank-you Hoot, Glad you liked it. |
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passing shadows Member Empyrean
since 1999-08-26
Posts 45577displaced |
oh...methinks I like! ------------------ *shadowy-one* |
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Michael
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Member Rara Avis
since 1999-08-13
Posts 7666California |
A beautiful poem, Lost Dreamer, Like the sun peeking out after a storm. Michael |
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Denise
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Member Seraphic
since 1999-08-22
Posts 22648 |
Very enjoyable! I like happy endings and hope!  ------------------ Denise |
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