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Seymour Tabin
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0 posted 1999-09-16 12:05 PM


Menage memorandum
She wakes, the bride of Frankenstein
Retires to her bathroom shrine. She showers and uptowels her hair
And plucks her brows to nearly bare.

She creams her face a mystic sheen
The pallor of an English queen.
Depilator's her hairy legs
And paints her eyes like Easter eggs.

She manicures her hands and toes
A little powder on her nose
A pinch of cheek to whisper pink
Hangs earrings that would rouse a shrink.

She changes cloths a dozen times
Each time each look she pantomimes.
And challenges the mirrored wall
To show the fairest of them all?

Startles me with a piercing "HEY,"
Good God, "I look like hell today."


[This message has been edited by Seymour Tabin (edited 09-16-99).]

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Iloveit
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since 1999-09-02
Posts 1121
NM
1 posted 1999-09-16 12:35 PM


LOLOL great picture, but we aren't really THAT bad are we?*and she looks in the mirror and pinches her cheeks just a bit.....> really well done! you made me smile!

[This message has been edited by Iloveit (edited 09-16-99).]

U K Hero
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since 1999-08-08
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England
2 posted 1999-09-16 12:41 PM


Loved it,well thought out, well writen, well I guess you must have dated my woman.
Seymour Tabin
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3 posted 1999-09-16 01:37 PM


ILoveit,
You don't really want me to say Do you?
Thanks for the LOL.
U K hero,
Yes I've been out with a few.
Thanks for the read and comment.

LngJhnAg
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since 1999-07-23
Posts 3508
Boot+Kitty=Poetry in motion
4 posted 1999-09-16 01:40 PM


Sy
Excellent! this will have all those "painted ladies" squirming and acting defensive.

Menage #1
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since 1999-07-20
Posts 28

5 posted 1999-09-16 06:40 PM


What's this? Sy's picking on us? Where are the other two when you need them, anyway???
caroline
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since 1999-08-16
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http://members.xoom.com/belladona123/index.htm
6 posted 1999-09-16 07:13 PM


Good one Sy! I look like Beetlejuice in the mornings *LOL* SCARY!!

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The only man worth your tears will never make you cry...

Beki
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since 1999-09-15
Posts 1569
Newport Beach, CA, USA
7 posted 1999-09-16 07:17 PM


Now I know why I have never worn make up......don't want to end up here ! LOL you did make me laugh!

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"We read and write poetry because we are members of the human race. And the human race is filled with passion.....the powerful play goes on and you may contribute a verse. What will your verse be?"
--John Keating, Dead Poets Society

Paul Allen Lupien
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since 1999-09-09
Posts 114
Ferndale,Mi.USA
8 posted 1999-09-16 07:17 PM


Yeah,buy I betcha she's faithful!

Thanx for the larf...

PAL

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Pepper
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since 1999-08-19
Posts 3079
Southern Florida
9 posted 1999-09-16 07:19 PM


can't stop laughing......

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May your days be filled with lots of sunshine and your nights lit up by golden moonbeams

Denise
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10 posted 1999-09-16 07:53 PM


This is hillarious, Seymour! I enjoyed this one!

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Denise

Seymour Tabin
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since 1999-07-07
Posts 31720
Tamarac Fla
11 posted 1999-09-16 11:00 PM


To all my ladies fair,
I was only blowing smoke
from my chair. love you all.

Menage Numero Trois
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since 1999-07-20
Posts 33
Zee South of France
12 posted 1999-09-16 11:52 PM


HAA HAA Ho Ho
Vee have search you out. The Terrifying Trio veel always get you in the eend.
Great poem by the way
#3

Seymour Tabin
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since 1999-07-07
Posts 31720
Tamarac Fla
13 posted 1999-09-17 01:50 PM


Menage,
Thanks for the comment, ALL THREE.

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