Open Poetry #2 |
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Seymour Tabin Member Empyrean
since 1999-07-07
Posts 31720Tamarac Fla |
Menage memorandum She wakes, the bride of Frankenstein Retires to her bathroom shrine. She showers and uptowels her hair And plucks her brows to nearly bare. She creams her face a mystic sheen The pallor of an English queen. Depilator's her hairy legs And paints her eyes like Easter eggs. She manicures her hands and toes A little powder on her nose A pinch of cheek to whisper pink Hangs earrings that would rouse a shrink. She changes cloths a dozen times Each time each look she pantomimes. And challenges the mirrored wall To show the fairest of them all? Startles me with a piercing "HEY," Good God, "I look like hell today." [This message has been edited by Seymour Tabin (edited 09-16-99).] |
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Iloveit Senior Member
since 1999-09-02
Posts 1121NM |
LOLOL great picture, but we aren't really THAT bad are we?*and she looks in the mirror and pinches her cheeks just a bit.....> really well done! you made me smile! [This message has been edited by Iloveit (edited 09-16-99).] |
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U K Hero Member
since 1999-08-08
Posts 266England |
Loved it,well thought out, well writen, well I guess you must have dated my woman. |
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Seymour Tabin Member Empyrean
since 1999-07-07
Posts 31720Tamarac Fla |
ILoveit, You don't really want me to say Do you? Thanks for the LOL. U K hero, Yes I've been out with a few. Thanks for the read and comment. |
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LngJhnAg Member Elite
since 1999-07-23
Posts 3508Boot+Kitty=Poetry in motion |
Sy Excellent! this will have all those "painted ladies" squirming and acting defensive. |
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Menage #1 Junior Member
since 1999-07-20
Posts 28 |
What's this? Sy's picking on us? Where are the other two when you need them, anyway??? |
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caroline Senior Member
since 1999-08-16
Posts 1218http://members.xoom.com/belladona123/index.htm |
Good one Sy! I look like Beetlejuice in the mornings *LOL* SCARY!! ------------------ The only man worth your tears will never make you cry... |
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Beki Senior Member
since 1999-09-15
Posts 1569Newport Beach, CA, USA |
Now I know why I have never worn make up......don't want to end up here ! LOL you did make me laugh! ------------------ "We read and write poetry because we are members of the human race. And the human race is filled with passion.....the powerful play goes on and you may contribute a verse. What will your verse be?" --John Keating, Dead Poets Society |
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Paul Allen Lupien Member
since 1999-09-09
Posts 114Ferndale,Mi.USA |
Yeah,buy I betcha she's faithful! Thanx for the larf... PAL ------------------ |
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Pepper Member Elite
since 1999-08-19
Posts 3079Southern Florida |
can't stop laughing...... ------------------ May your days be filled with lots of sunshine and your nights lit up by golden moonbeams |
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Denise
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Member Seraphic
since 1999-08-22
Posts 22648 |
This is hillarious, Seymour! I enjoyed this one! ------------------ Denise |
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Seymour Tabin Member Empyrean
since 1999-07-07
Posts 31720Tamarac Fla |
To all my ladies fair, I was only blowing smoke from my chair. love you all. |
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Menage Numero Trois Junior Member
since 1999-07-20
Posts 33Zee South of France |
HAA HAA Ho Ho Vee have search you out. The Terrifying Trio veel always get you in the eend. Great poem by the way #3 |
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Seymour Tabin Member Empyrean
since 1999-07-07
Posts 31720Tamarac Fla |
Menage, Thanks for the comment, ALL THREE. |
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