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Open Poetry #2

The Untitled One

MissQ
Junior Member

since 1999-09-16

Posts 12
Clarksdale, MS 38614

0 posted 1999-09-16 10:34 AM

Untitled

Like a gentle breeze you came to me

Closed my eyes and breathed you in.

Engulfed my soul

with a light so strong,

I feel the darkness beginning to dim.

Uncertainty and guilt

always have loomed so near.

Closing the doors, giving up,

unable to lose this fear.

Rising up from the smoke of my prayers

many things left unsaid.

I feel your energy holding me up,

clearing the clouds inside of my head.

For you , I'm forever grateful

Basking in your light.

Always within my heart

Forever in my sight.

caroline
Senior Member

since 1999-08-16

Posts 1218
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1 posted 1999-09-16 10:41 AM

This is beautiful!! "Closed my eyes and breathed you in"...what a great line.

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The only man worth your tears will never make you cry...

Artur Hawkwing
Member

since 1999-06-30

Posts 444
USA

2 posted 1999-09-16 11:43 AM

I love this !! Good one !

hoot_owl_rn
Member Patricius

since 1999-07-05

Posts 10750
Glen Hope, PA USA

3 posted 1999-09-16 09:14 PM

Nicely written piece.....I really like the lines:
"Always within my heart
Forever in my sight."

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"In the depths of winter, I finally learned that there was in me an invincible summer" ~Albert Camus

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