Open Poetry #2 |
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MissQ Junior Member
since 1999-09-16
Posts 12Clarksdale, MS 38614 |
Untitled Like a gentle breeze you came to me Closed my eyes and breathed you in. Engulfed my soul with a light so strong, I feel the darkness beginning to dim. Uncertainty and guilt always have loomed so near. Closing the doors, giving up, unable to lose this fear. Rising up from the smoke of my prayers many things left unsaid. I feel your energy holding me up, clearing the clouds inside of my head. For you , I'm forever grateful Basking in your light. Always within my heart Forever in my sight. |
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caroline Senior Member
since 1999-08-16
Posts 1218http://members.xoom.com/belladona123/index.htm |
This is beautiful!! "Closed my eyes and breathed you in"...what a great line. ![]() ------------------ The only man worth your tears will never make you cry... |
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Artur Hawkwing Member
since 1999-06-30
Posts 444USA |
I love this !! Good one ! |
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hoot_owl_rn Member Patricius
since 1999-07-05
Posts 10750Glen Hope, PA USA |
Nicely written piece.....I really like the lines: "Always within my heart Forever in my sight." ------------------ "In the depths of winter, I finally learned that there was in me an invincible summer" ~Albert Camus |
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