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Christopher
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since 1999-08-02
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Purgatorial Incarceration

0 posted 1999-09-16 03:45 AM


Like a cleansing rain
a sultry storm in summer bright
YOUYOUYOU
wash through my arid heart

The lonely moisture,
(my salty tears)
tossed about, driven away,
subsumed
by the passion
of my
newfound
-inspiration-

Hope...
I dimly recall such a term.
...and I attach it
to your name.
It purges the hatred,
forbears loneliness,
instills life
where existed-
...no breath of peace

Once,
I was
e m p t y
a desolate, souless void-
I am now,
possibly forever,
filled with the beauteous
...echoes
of only...


YOU



[This message has been edited by Christopher (edited 09-16-99).]

© Copyright 1999 C.G. Ward - All Rights Reserved
DreamEvil
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since 1999-06-22
Posts 2396

1 posted 1999-09-16 04:08 AM


Budding romantic are we? Hmm?

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Pain is life, life is short, I will endure.
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caroline
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since 1999-08-16
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2 posted 1999-09-16 05:39 AM


and blooming beautifully, I might add...love this one, Christopher!

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The only man worth your tears will never make you cry...

RainbowGirl
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since 1999-07-31
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3 posted 1999-09-16 06:42 AM


Christopher:..Excellent..

HUGS

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You give but little when you give of your possessions. It is when you give of yourself that you truly give.


poetFemmeFatale
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since 1999-07-25
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Arkansas
4 posted 1999-09-16 10:35 AM


Very very beautiful piece Christopher....you do have a bit of warmth in that heart of yours....(wink)

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I beckon you to come...I lure you with my tongue... - poet FemmeFatale



Christopher
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Purgatorial Incarceration
5 posted 1999-09-16 03:20 PM


You see dream, I get in these moods... (much like a certain other person,) and can't help myself...

Thank you girls! a and a For you!

hoot_owl_rn
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since 1999-07-05
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6 posted 1999-09-16 09:08 PM


Christopher....a very nice one indeed

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"In the depths of winter, I finally learned that there was in me an invincible summer" ~Albert Camus

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